What do you think about this story so far???

well that just like totally sucks. sorry, but its not too good. I don't mean ur writing, cuz u r like extremely talented! But just the topic is just terrible. but whatever, good luck, I really think your teacher is going to like it. Keep it up. I am writing a story, but I'm not that discriptive, and thats what I'm trying to do. well hope that kinda helped, or at least incouraged you or something! XD =]